Typos.

Typos… sometimes they can be hilarious.

Just in the first draft of a conversation between James and Ryan for ‘The Loss of Innocence.’

Spot the cock-up…

*****

“What help? Why should Kirstie need your help?” He leans close, hissing, “You think I don’t know how you met her? At the clubs in a threesome while you were having your fun and frolics? That was years ago and it doesn’t give you the right to…”

“She asked for my help. Don’t you want to hear what she had to say?”

Lips pressed flat, bolt upright in his seat, “Alright then, what did she say?”

Resisting my own rising temper…

… which won’t help Kirstie…

“Kirstie is your sub…”

“So?” The syllable could cut metal.

“… and you are her Doom. But as I understand it, you are fairly new to D/s relationships?”

*****